Thursday, May 19, 2016

Blake sory

Teeth, Brushing, Brush                               

How to brush your teeth


    First you have to get  your teeth brush .

Then you need to get your toothpaste.

And  put it on your tooth brush. When you have done

That you wet your toothbrush under the tap.

Then brush your teeth.

Leave the tap on so you can spit the toothpaste out and it want

Stay in the sink.when you have brushed  your teeth.

Wash your toothbrush then pet your toothbrush away

And your tooth paste. And ter the tap off. Then

Clean your face.


  1. I like how you put fall stops in your story,You did a good job.

  2. You done a really awesome job Blake I have never seen you right that much.

  3. ka pai blake becuase some people dont know how to brush there teeth but now they can becuase they can look at this. a really big ka pai!

  4. You might want to check your spelling but Ka pai Blake

  5. Kia ora Its Morgan from mamaku 2 grey main. I thin that it is really helpful to now how to brush you teeth and if I was an alien I would no how to brush my teeth by you description.Next time try to spell put and tern properly.


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