We are a year 4/5 class at Gilberthorpe School. This is a place where we can share our learning with you. We also have our own blogs which are linked off the right hand side of the page. Please note that some of this work will be our first draft, so there may be some errors. We would love to see your comments, feedback, thoughts and ideas!
Kia Ora, my name is Alex Co from Grey Main School. I think that you have done a great job of showing how to rest and relax. I think that is a great topic. Next time you could maybe insert some images of you doing the things. Heoi ano taku mo naianei (That's all for now) From Alex Co
u did not just haves things that tell you about relaxing you also have stuff involving not relaxing. Next time you could have a photo of the people in the class relaxing. Do you know anyone that is always relaxed?
Kia Ora Ratahub. I like how you did not just haves things that tell you about relaxing you also have stuff involving not relaxing. Next time you could have a photo of the people in the class relaxing. Do you know anyone that is always relaxed?
Kia Ora Rata Hub I think that this is a very good idea because it can help people. Sometimes I feel stressed with schoolwork. You could work on your layout and colours as some of the pages are more difficult to read! Why are you working on this? Ka Pai (Good work) From Jessie at Grey Main School
Kia Ora Rata Hub. I'm Sam from Mamaku hub at Grey Main. I really like how you have set up this slide and it is important to relax because otherwise you will get all stressed and angry like a spring. The layout of the slide was very good but maybe next time you could make sure that some of the things stay on the slide rather than going off to the side. Nou hoki Faka'apa'apa(Yours Sincerely) Sam.
Kia Ora It's Caitlyn K here from Grey Main School In Mamaku. I think it is important to relax because you need alot of energy to run and go to school and walk everywhere. That is great that you are learning about relaxing great job Noho Ora Mai please feel really free to visit my blog What do you already know about relaxing? Do you find it easy to relax? From Caitlyn K
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Kia Ora, my name is Alex Co from Grey Main School. I think that you have done a great job of showing how to rest and relax. I think that is a great topic. Next time you could maybe insert some images of you doing the things.
ReplyDeleteHeoi ano taku mo naianei (That's all for now)
From Alex Co
u did not just haves things that tell you about relaxing you also have stuff involving not relaxing. Next time you could have a photo of the people in the class relaxing. Do you know anyone that is always relaxed?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ratahub. I like how you did not just haves things that tell you about relaxing you also have stuff involving not relaxing. Next time you could have a photo of the people in the class relaxing. Do you know anyone that is always relaxed?
DeleteKia Ora Rata Hub
ReplyDeleteI think that this is a very good idea because it can help people. Sometimes I feel stressed with schoolwork. You could work on your layout and colours as some of the pages are more difficult to read! Why are you working on this? Ka Pai (Good work)
From Jessie at Grey Main School
Kia Ora Rata Hub.
ReplyDeleteI'm Sam from Mamaku hub at Grey Main.
I really like how you have set up this slide and it is important to relax because otherwise you will get all stressed and angry like a spring. The layout of the slide was very good but maybe next time you could make sure that some of the things stay on the slide rather than going off to the side.
Nou hoki Faka'apa'apa(Yours Sincerely)
Sam.
Thanks Sam we'll use your advice!
DeleteHI it is me sophie adams.
ReplyDeleteI like how you did it.
I love it to moon and back to you
mr c.frome tawa class
Hi this is Skyla.
ReplyDeleteI like the keep calm and never give up.
I like the vale this week.
This taught me about how to relax a lot.
Kia Ora It's Caitlyn K here from Grey Main School In Mamaku. I think it is important to relax because you need alot of energy to run and go to school and walk everywhere. That is great that you are learning about relaxing great job Noho Ora Mai please feel really free to visit my blog What do you already know about relaxing? Do you find it easy to relax? From Caitlyn K
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