Thursday, May 19, 2016

Bryce how to brush your teth

First  you  grab  my  toothbrush.

Next  you grab your  toothpaste and open the toothpaste.

Then you put some toothpaste on your toothbrush.

When your done that turn the tap on and wet your toothbrush.

Now start brushing your teeth.

After you  brushed your teeth spit the toothpaste out.

Lastly  rinse your toothbrush and turn the tap off.

From Bryce


  1. Good job but do you want people to grab your toothbrush.

  2. Hi Bryce this was great . There was some handy stuff for starters . If they read this they will understand how to do it .

    Make sure you go through your writing again .

  3. Hi im Hannah.N from Rimu class Nice way of explaining of how to brush your teeth.Next step is to make sure you have spelt all your words right.


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