Thursday, May 19, 2016

Olivers story

First turn the tap on. Then get your toothbrush and Put your toothbrush under the tap.

Next get your toothpaste and put it on the toothbrush. Now brush your teeth.

Spit it out in the sink.  Lastly wash your mouth out.


  1. I like how you put a lot of detailes

  2. nice work but if someone new came and they didn't now how to brush there teeth they mite not know how to turn the tap off

  3. I like how you put a lot of detailes and a lot of sentensis I think it's really cool.

  4. Hi Oliver. Cool story if I forget how to brush my teeth I will just follow these steps to get me back on track. next time try and put more words on.


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