We are a year 4/5 class at Gilberthorpe School. This is a place where we can share our learning with you. We also have our own blogs which are linked off the right hand side of the page. Please note that some of this work will be our first draft, so there may be some errors. We would love to see your comments, feedback, thoughts and ideas!
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
I like how you put a lot of detailes
ReplyDeletenice work but if someone new came and they didn't now how to brush there teeth they mite not know how to turn the tap off
ReplyDeleteI like how you put a lot of detailes and a lot of sentensis I think it's really cool.
ReplyDeleteHi Oliver. Cool story if I forget how to brush my teeth I will just follow these steps to get me back on track. next time try and put more words on.
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