Wednesday, July 6, 2016

Improving my comments. Bryce

Improving My Comments

I needed to add a qeastion next time I need to write a greting.

This is my comment when I got better at writing.This comment has a positive helpful a greeting end punctuation 

But I need to work on to adding a qeastion 

                                                           This is my comment when I wasn't so good at writing comments.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Bryce
    I can see such an improvement in your writing and your blog commenting.
    Tu meke!!


Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about