We are a year 4/5 class at Gilberthorpe School. This is a place where we can share our learning with you. We also have our own blogs which are linked off the right hand side of the page. Please note that some of this work will be our first draft, so there may be some errors. We would love to see your comments, feedback, thoughts and ideas!
Monday, March 14, 2016
The Amazing Day at Jelly Park - By Aaliyah
On Friday Gilberthorpe school went to Jelly Park instead of doing devices and other stuff.We got there in a bus.When we got there we had to wait a bit and we all got bracelets with codes on them because if we didn't we won't be able to go on hider slide.Then we got dressed in the changing room.First I went down the hider slide I went down on the fast one first.When I went down it gave me a wedge.Next time I went up there I went down the swirly one.It was real fun so I kept on going on that one.Then my legs got tired so I went in the pool.I did a canin ball into the pool.I played a game with my little brother it was called eat the mermaid.Ezra was a shark and I was the mermaid.This is how you play Ezra just has to grab me and I try to get away.I hope we can do it again!!!
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I like the celors.
ReplyDeleteHi Aaliyah it's Alyscia, You have written a good story but you're next step will reading through you're story a couple of times to make sure you are not missing any Capital letters, fall stops, or miss spelt words.But great work by the way.
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